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she blends with the snow
making her beautiful without the light,
shadows dissolved remind her
he was there before
and then the sky went blue
contagious expectations of
pain, goosebumps rising on her
skin but she can't feel it,
cant feel the sting
on her toes or the wind
clawing at her stained
cheeks. the sky is blue
but she is bluer.
and her hair
lovely mascara strands
brushing along her inside
stroking her heart a natural black,
she will forget him
as soon as the water drains from the earth
and her tears refuse to shine
breathless cascade of yesterday's
smiles, swirling lullaby of twisted
words that used to fall from his lips
like candy, her sugared candy
loveliness, his heart a cookie jar
that she couldn't resist stealing from.
and how all is emptiness,
blue and heartless silver
moonlight.
:iconmalevolent-heartache:

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very caught up in pain lately.

and one of us had a mental picture...
and that's where this came from.

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:iconduckie2318:
wow what a great piece. good job

~Nirvana--Floyd The Barber~
I sense others in the room
Opie, Aunt Bea I presume
They take turns and cut me up
I die smothered in Aunt Bee's muff...
:iconincubusdreamer:
iiiiiiiiiiiii loooooooove iiiiiiiimaaaaaaageryyyyyyyyy...... you guys should do one with lots and lots and lots of imagery D D D very good.

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~*i love you, and i'd rather have your heart...than your penis <3*~

98% of the teenage population does or has tried smoking pot. If you're one of the 2% who hasn't, copy & paste this in your
:iconmalevolent-heartache:
haha thanks cass but i'm pretty sure that we have lots and lots of imagery all ready. :D

oooh.

things ARE weird now
:(
:iconemage:
Wow I love how you like compare things to her like snow and the sky!! It's awesome.

I have a question, how do you write these together?? I don't get it. Do you like alternate lines or something??

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~~And you can blame it on me, set your guilt free, don't want to hold you back, now leave~~
:iconmalevolent-heartache:
mhm. we'll be like "k i got this' and then the other person adds as much as she wants and then yah.

we do that. :)



and we share ideas and whatnot.
:iconemage:
Ok. Mystery solved. :)

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~~And you can blame it on me, set your guilt free, don't want to hold you back, now leave~~

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